Criteria on my writing

I think I am doing a nice job. Since I started, maybe I am not writing long enough as much as my others classmates. I know that this is not my first language and it is complicated sometimes. I also know that I still learning in my knowledge of the language. But It is not a big deal. I know I am able to realize this exercise. Which in certain way, It is helping me my academic achievement. I know that It could be at some part of my assignments phrases that do not make any sense. I am really trying to improve this minimum problem. Because I know It would go away with the practice and the study.

"This my favorite word because it all about me. First of all I did wish to have another, being able to chose my own name. But then I realize that my name is unique because it represent who I am. and uniqueness is printed in my name." it seems to make sense, once I reading again it kind me think in rewriting it.

Economy turn down

Economy the magic word that everyone is talking about. Everyone is worried because of this issue that is affecting most of the society. Especially, huge and powerful factories such as car factories and related. Until now I thought the economy it could not be a big issue. I realize that is the most important ingredient in a society. I heard about recession. I really don't know what was this word. I never heard before. Maybe I have never experimented before. But now, I know that it has to be with the GDP of the country. GDP in the united states is lower than normal.

This issues is in everywhere, TV News and so on. I also heard that we been in recession from the months ago, but now is when is declaring that United States is in recession. I hope that this issues do not take longer, because the longer it takes the more people would be losing their jobs, families would be fighting a big problem in relation to the economy. The expert in the theme says the recession usually takes around 10 months or less. But unfortunately, they also predict this recession would be longer than a year.

This is kind of funny because the dealers in order to get rid of the new vehicles, they are doing some offers. I was not expecting these. Buy a car and you get another for free. That is really weird because usually seems on clothes, notebooks, etc. but not in car. At some point, I think the economy is getting really bad. There are a lot of dealers especially are getting close because of consumers. We are playing an interesting role, but how are we going to buy when we are losing our jobs. We are not getting incomes. In particular, I am stable for now. I hope not to experiment as others people.

Critical post for some.

It is hard to read trouhg everyday. It probably take longer. But scannig through this blog I can notice that this person has a descriptive style of her life is about. It is most about memories during her life. It is pretty interesting listen to stories because most of us has one that is similar to one of these. I think that there is no wrong way to express you feelings. There are differents ways.

I think this person likes to write basically about her family. It is interesting to hear stories when she/he was a child. I would say that the type of writing of this person very descriptive because almost give many details of what really is talking about.

I notice that has good grammar writing with a high level of vocabulary. It has a good puntuaction. I think her writing is intend to people who would like to hear stories. I really think that this blog it is really in a descriptive language. I think this person is very expressive and that she express in her writing.